Headline says “A second Trump Burger owner was detained by ICE. His lawyer says he’s suffering from medical neglect.”, Attached is an image of George Bush Jr being notified that a second plane has hit the World Trade Center.

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    17 days ago

    Once you get to the second semicolon in the same sentence, I’m calling it journalistic malpractice.

    8 commas

    2 em dashes

    2 semicolons

    1 sentence